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Post by madisonlarosa on Jun 27, 2010 19:12:09 GMT -5
[atrb=border,0,true][cs=6][bg=e3e3e3]
madison LaRosaShe's a rebel, she's a saint she's the salt of the earth and she's dangerous. She's a rebel, vigalante. Missing link on the brink to destruction. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - AGE,
age 19 goes here.
GENDER,
Female
OCCUPATION,
she has sold quite a few books as an author. Mainly horror novels, and mysteries.
SOCIAL CLASS,
umiddle class
SEXUALITY,
Bi-curious
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- CONDEMN,
FEARS,
DREAMS,
HOBBIES,
HABITS,
TALENTS,
SECRETS,
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how did you come to find forever & ever?
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[/b], not this actual site you're posting on right now.[/ul][/size][/blockquote][/justify] SSECOND,what do you consider to be your good points?
[/b] for one thing. I'll easily talk to you. without hesitation. I'm also good at giving advice. I always have been. I can give you any kind of advice except for romance...bleh.Hm....what else? Oh I'm very athletic.It's a gift I tell ya. I can easily pick up on a sport. Heh, volleyball has ALWAYS been my biggest hobby, besides my writing. OH that's another! My imagination is very big. I also don't care what people think. Why should I live up to other people's expectations instead of my own?And I'll also do anything for my friends.[/ul] and what would you consider to be your bad points?[/b] [/b]. Sure I'm outgoing but that doesn't mean I'm the nicest person in the world. Also the fact that I have a very short temper ain't all that great either. I have a tendency to act without thinking. And who could forget my amazing inability to keep my balance.That's another. And my ADD is a bit on the bad traits too. And last but not least my crappy penmanship. Typing is your lifesaver when your penmanship isn't all that great.[/ul][/size][/blockquote][/justify] THIRD,what do you look for in a friend, a love interest, a lover or people in general?
FOURTH,do you believe in "love at first sight"?
FIFTH,how do you know you have found "the one"?
OTHER,- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -[/size][/center] ALIAS,Pixie REFERAL,An advertisement on Ocean of Stars CHARACTERS,N/A [b]ichigo 100%,[/b]kitaooji satsuki[color=d74343]Madison LaRosa[/color] [/blockquote][/td][/tr][/table]
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Post by RIMY on Jun 28, 2010 14:34:49 GMT -5
PENDING!
This is quite an interesting app I see here~! However despite of the typos and such, there are still some things you need to fix before we can accept you.
[x] There is a coding error on the first line where you enter your name. You also have to enter your name in the given space where it says 'your name here'.
[x] Could you expand your occupation a bit? Like if she's a struggling author; an amateur one--or if she's all ready sold a few books.
[x] For your condemns, you can take off the part where it says "a list of what your character likes or adores."
[x] In one of her secrets, she says that she keeps her little brother a secret. Could you expand on that so people can understand why she would do such a thing?
[x] For the questionaries, first, second, third, fourth, fifth and others, could you please take the <div align="justify">text text text</div> and change it to [justify*] [/justify*] (taking out the *s) instead, like asked on the application?
[x] There is a coding error on your FIRST question.
[x] For your second question, please try to balance out your traits. You have six good traits and only four bad ones when you need at least five.
[x] you have a big coding error on the face claim. Try again, using this code while taking out the *.
[code*]NAME OF SERIES HERE, name of face claim in all lowercase, name of character (first and last) here in all lowercase[/code*]
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Post by madisonlarosa on Jun 28, 2010 17:16:56 GMT -5
Edited
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Post by RIMY on Jun 28, 2010 18:52:34 GMT -5
PENDING!
Thanks for the editing~! However, what ever happened to the table ? You know the gray thing that was around the app the first time? And also I think you messed up a lot of the coding while fixing them so, if you could fix all those codings again, I'd love you. The face claim code is also wrong, you don't need to delete everything, just input the things you need to so that we can see the colors and such.
I would recommend you to just copy and paste a new application form and copy paste your information into it. Please try to check if there are any coding errors before posting it by pressing the preview button. Thank you so much~!
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Post by madisonlarosa on Jun 28, 2010 20:21:03 GMT -5
Edited~
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Post by RIMY on Jun 30, 2010 22:00:15 GMT -5
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YESH! You know what ~? We're almost there! <3 <3 <3 As you can see there are some coding errors in your first and second question. It should be the same as three, four and so on. Also in the first question, you repeated the questions so you may want to take the repetition out of there. : D
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Post by madisonlarosa on Jul 2, 2010 3:35:32 GMT -5
Edited~
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Post by RIMY on Jul 3, 2010 13:21:29 GMT -5
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Seriously, ALMOST THERE! /claps. So yea, you still have the coding error there. Try to look back at the original app and see what's wrong. You still haven't taken out the repeated question in the first question either. Also, I realised that you have an error on your faceclaim too. Basically, we are just asking you to put the ANIME - in capital, use your caplock, then the character you are using, who is Kitaooji Satsuki all in lowercase and finally your character's name which should be the one in the color code. Please try to fix and check until it's right before replying.
- Thank you, very, very much.
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Post by madisonlarosa on Jul 9, 2010 4:14:25 GMT -5
Edited~
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Post by RIMY on Jul 9, 2010 18:57:34 GMT -5
PENDING!
I am so happy :'D YOU ALMOST DID IT! Do you see the coding errors around the app? Especially around the last part with FONT, CENTER and SIZE? If you can fix those, I can accept you <3 <3 !
and I am sorry for the pm XD I disappeared for a while
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Post by madisonlarosa on Jul 9, 2010 23:53:37 GMT -5
Edited~~~
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